December 13
Comments: 2
Reliving the Story
While I go through each chapter individually, I’m allowing myself to relive the story as though it’s the first time I’m hearing of it. The results of that mindset have been somewhat amazing. It’s allowed me to look at the scene from new eyes and find things that I might otherwise have overlooked.
Following the second draft of the first chapter, I sent it out for a quick critique and one of the responses I received mentioned that my male lead had revealed more of himself this time around, which is a splendid thing.
I’m trying to do the same thing for the second chapter, but I’m finding it a bit difficult to slip out of my male lead’s head and into the female lead’s. They have two distinct voices and I need for that to come through in the writing and style.
Rather than spend time revising chapter 2 today, I do believe I will spend that time interviewing my female lead.
Plus, I’m certain it would help if I could come up with that elusive scene song that captures the mood and mindset of the character.